I liked this poem it was different. I would like to see more poems like this one. The flow was good and the word choice was different. I see nothing that needs changing. It would have been nice if it was a little longer though. 5/5
This defies words.A sincere, heartfelt love poem then tempered with misunderstanding, even mistrust and a sense of sadness and loss..Some things start out so perfect and beautiful then turn into something sad, angry, totally diffeernt.How does this happen?You have captured so much, so well here.