My Point of View

by twisted reality   Jul 26, 2006


That one night, not too long ago,
You yelled at me like you'd never let it go.
I don't know what you're looking for.
Don't touch that bruise, it's ever so sore.

You called me up for no reason at all,
Just to look for something that was just down the hall.
I felt so unloved and used,
Also tremendously abused.

You tuck them into bed at night,
You never came to see if I've turned off my light.
You love them ten times more than me.
Every day, more of that I see.

I slit my wrists at night,
Just wishing everything would be alright.
I know it will never come to be,
Because every day, I want to run and flee.

My friends are the only ones who I have left,
Even with them, I have wept and wept.
I don't know why you're doing this.
I don't even get a good night kiss.

Your daughter, I am supposed to be?
Supposed to feel with happiness and glee.
Instead, you make me feel like a slave.
I really am trying to be brave.

One day I won't even be here.
Like you'd care-you'd probably have a beer.
That day, I'll be too late to save,
"Good luck to you," I say as I wave.

xoxo
Samantha

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This poem was excellent. At first I thought you had been talking about a lover or a friend, but as I got reading it I understood. I'm assuming 'them' refers to booze? Either way, I could definitely feel your soul within this poem. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is a very dark poem that was full with emotion. i can relate to this poem in so many ways. sad, but a job well done on it. i'm sorry about this too =[. if you need to talk i'm here =] 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    One thing about this poem that innoticed was the line lenth, some were long and others were short and it didnt flow as good as it could.
    But the poem itself was good and it was sad, although the emotions could have been shown more. its a good read though, well done
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lynz

    Omg sam do you still feel this way I hope not because I love you don't cut your wrist because you can die i hope you don't feel this way anymore If you do I'll help you
    XOXOXO
    *~*LYNZ*~*

  • 17 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    So sad.... im sorry u are down.... i am here to talk to if ya need.. i know u dont even know me but still i kinda understand a lil bit... but talking is the best way to get ur feelings out that are holding you down. and writing helps a great deal as well. 5/5

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