Blue is the sadness dwelled inside,
A troubled soul that has been denied,
Of love and friendship in this world,
When hate and envy are unfurled.
Grey is the color of the falling rain,
Weeping with insanity that was never explained.
It's the mourning and the sadness formed inside,
Our worried selves, filled with pride.
Black is as deep as emotions can go,
Revealing everything it can possibly show.
This is when we all break down,
And in our emotions we seem to drown.
Yellow is the happiness we all possess,
That allows us laughter we can all express.
Through all our times of sadness and woe,
Yellow is the color we all need to know.
Colors are rather precisely unique,
All containing their own physique.
But in order to live every day of our lives,
We've got to make sure every color survives.
Ok, this is a totally random poem. I was going to make more colors but I was running out of ideas XD I would tell you all what this really means but I want you to be able to read through the lines and figure it out. =)
this poem was really well expressed and the flow was magnificent.
It was really heartfelt and showed your talent.
Yet I noticed that there wasn't as much emotion in this poem as if could of had. You explain what the color of the rain and the color of sadness was, yet you didn't describe the sensation of it. This poem would really stand out if you had gone one step deeper and indulged in this piece and explained your feelings with each color.
But in all you did great!!
I really enjoyed it.
I liked how you put punctuation in this piece,
it was as a sweet song.
You did fantastic.