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by TinyDancer46 Aug 23, 2006
Love, romance /
A heart he stole away from me
Right from my bleeding chest
And through the wounds, I gave him love
For he deserved the best
A treasure I held in my hands
That promised he would stay
My prince I had now, finally
He'd never go away...
But through the stormy weather
With the lies I failed to see
My prince had found a princess
And he loved her more than me...
Yet I couldn't see the damage
Through the dark storm, I was blind
Conceived by what I dreamed for,
Love was perfect in my mind...
Till one day, lightening struck me
My prince left without a trace
My broken heart screamed out his name
While tears poured down my face
Now I'm crying on this wooden floor
Wishing then I knew
That fairy-tales are make-believe
And dreams do not come true
Great poem! Very sad..
So very sad.
Nice written, can feel the hurt.
by Mary Daphne
The words, the lines.. every part of the poem is getting inside the reader, and though i have a happy life with my partner i can feel the pain. it deserves a 5/5. great work!
That was amazing!