Spotted Fur [Haiku]

by Jessica   Oct 5, 2006


Spotted fur shimmers
Olive eyes hold sharp gazes
Elegant deceit..

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A Haiku is an unrhymed poem with the syllable count of 5/7/5

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    This is a great haiku, i love it! short, simple but it paints a great picture. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, very nicely written! The last line is such a strong finish, with perfect words. You chose exactly the right words to put what you wanted across. Excellently written. Keep it up. =] 5/5

    Tammie x

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...this is probably one of the best haikus i've ever read

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Nice!
    short but amazing!
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is another great poem that i liked. 5/5

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