Scent of Her Web (Collaboration)

by Angie   Oct 19, 2006


Scent of Her Web (Collaboration)
By Andrea and Angela

Diamond jewels seep
Slowly dripping from her fingertips
Weaving deathly poison
Under the light of the moon

Crystal eyes once bright
Darkened now by pain
Waits among the shadows
To pounce upon her prey

Designs of elegant pearls
Hanging from evil spun nooses
Sucking the life from hunted captive
She grins, revenge dangles upon her lips

Inner peace restored again
But beware the scent of her web
For when betrayed
Evil shall reign once more

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  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow! I never knew you did a collab with Maple! I love it!

    I think it merges together so well and you both have such a similar talent for writing and for describing things so briefly, yet accurately and vividly.

    I love the tone of the poem, and especially since it is a collab, I feel it is like strength by numbers, revenge by numbers, where the two of you are strong as one.

    Eerie, but very powerful job. So glad I stumbled on this one too!

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this one from the beginning to the end, it is amazing, with great and vivid imagery. I like the descriptions in this poem a lot, and the choice of words is superb.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Diamond jewels seep
    slowwly dripping from her fingertips

    wow what great images this one caught me from the title and just sucked me right in a wonderfull job you two, you work so well together and the end product is great added to my list of things that make me go hmmmmm

  • 12 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    This poem is deep and dark and written beautifully, its descriptive, intense and thought provoking. With an essence of the calm before the evil storm... Great collaborative piece ladies, keep up the fantastic work. Cheers!

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my, another great penned writing with beautiuful emotions, so dark...., i hope i could write like this someday, but could i? anyway, i hope thing is great with you, take care, hugs....from west, bert.~