You didn't do anything wrong, it's all me this time.
I don't really know what's wrong.
Maybe it's the fact I just saw my life flash before my eyes.
But it's not your fault.
You didn't know this would happen.
You didn't do this to me, I did.
I ruined myself, and now I'm hurt, permanently.
But you couldn't have done anything anyway.
It wouldn't have changed anything.
But don't blame yourself, just because...
I killed myself.
I love this poem. Its not your fault... such a great concept that everyone can relate to! The way it was written was very effective. But at the same time... it almost made me feel like I wanted to save you. Being able to fill a reader with emotions like this, ... I'm speechless. 5/5
Your poems are so sad some of mine are like that. i write down what i want to feel and all the horrid things that are in my mind this makes me fell better because if i want to have a good day i write and upsetting poem that would get rid of all my worry, anger, greif, anyway this poems remined me of some of mine:~)Sam
Wow...the ending was sure twist..atleast i did'nt expect it to end tht way.....it was beautiful....filled with emotions sad n emotional...n penned properly.
but i do think it'd hv been better expressed wth the usage of third person..kp writing!
it has it's own beauty!