Confined Glory

by Teria   Nov 16, 2006


Confined Glory.

Droplets from her eye,
shown she did cry.
Driven down in her selfish ways,
oh, so hard for her to obey.

Drunken night cause her pain,
Factitious ways keep her insane.
Her fabled mind in a drowse.
Her rotted death smells so fowl.

Fro light, in darkness she hid.
Coming to see her soul she'd bid.
Searching to be found,
as regrets begin to surround.

Thrusted to God ; his all mighty power.
Adding a brick to the unseen tower.
The pain subsides, along with sin,
and confined glory won't happen again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    5/5, keep up the good work. Great word choice.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    I like it. You did a good job on it. I really don't know what to say about it. You don't need to fix anything with it, that's for sure. This piece is perfect just as it is.

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very beautiful. Great message to get through. Very well written too!
    Well done! God Bless.

    Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A perfect poem, with a great word choice, i like it alot, keep up the great work like always.... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxslash616xxx

    Thats pretty good, I like the flow. The only, thing i didn't quite like was the last line. It just seems a might to long. But other than that awesome, and you know we cant be perfect so im not gonna sweat over somethig small like that

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