Achromatic Feelings

by Natalie   Nov 28, 2006


Achromatic feelings,
Mystical deep inside,
Manifested with tears,
Too silent to be heard,
Too Noticeable to hide.

_It's not the best poem, but I've been too busy to write lately, and this is the best I could come up with for now... :] Enjoy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha Wacker

    Um...i'm not sure what to say, except, that i think it's good, and not to deep!
    have fun

  • 17 years ago

    by fearose

    I love this poem. It's really good. 5/5

    Sometimes the most simple words can mean the most.

    `Ange!a

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I agree, very nice job. You were able to put such strong emotions into just a few lines. You're a very talented writer, keep it up! Loved it! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked the last line. It reminds me of a song. I don't remember which one, or who it's by, but it sounds so much like a song to me!! Anyways nice job Nat!!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Its a excellent poem 5/5 keep it up.

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