Secrets Veiled Within

by Jessica   Dec 1, 2006


Tears stick beneath delicate eyelids
Hiding pain that yearns to be free
Feelings suppressed; cries held back
Hearts locked; your love the only key..

Optimistic glances; disappointed eyes
Hoping hearts greedily sucked of trust
Falling deeper into a never ending lie
Feelings of pleasure slowly gathering dust..

Pulsating veins flow through heaven and hell
Bodies losing motion, pain paralyzing souls
Sharp breaths inhaled; oxygen silently departing
Each step taken, overcoming more endless holes..

Smudged black mascara; tousled brown hair
Glossy tears containing secrets veiled within
Porcelain smiles appear; emotions tied in knots
A weak heart collapsing, finally letting you win..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful...so sweet yet so sad.
    I loved this, I think you did a wonderful job.

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    I can really relate to this poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    The last stanza was my favourite! Such beautiful descriptions in it. wonderful poem!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, that was really really good. I think alot of people would be able to relate to this. It flows well, and uses plenty of emotion. I think my favorite line is:
    Feelings of pleasure slowly gathering dust..

    I'm not quite sure why, it just really stood out to me. Another great write by a great writter. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job it was...GREAT!! lol cant think of anything else so keep it up your poetry is a great read.

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