This is great...Really shows what Christmas time is like. No more judging your work unless its good criticism on yourself. You're a lovely writer and you deserve no more than that. You are the best writer I've seen on here!
this poem is too cute
it made me all fuzzy inside,
haha dont you just love christmas?
good job hun.
ps. im tara... read some of my poems if you get the chance, id like to see some more of yours, you seem to be a great writer.
keep it up.