Starlit Eyes - Parallelogram de Crystalline

by Gem   Jan 17, 2009

Xx Starlit Eyes xX

Bright snippets of pure light
Representing the glow from sweet spheres

Suppressed laughter is seen
Within depths of cerulean winks

Such translucent beauty
Flickering colours, bewitching orbs

Stars embedded above
Are no match for your beautiful eyes

17/01/09 - 22.51

Parallelogram de Crystalline is a poetry form created by Karan God's Warrior dedicated to his soul mate Crystal Rose. This form consists of 4 verses 3 line in each verse. The syllable count for each stanza is 3,6,9. In this style of poem the beauty of a lover is compared with the nature and described.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Jane Do-Re-Mi

    This is really clever. Well done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Nice, I think I have to try this form.

    It looks like fun. I haven't counted the syllables but I might come back later during the day to check to see if they are spot on.

    • 6 years ago

      by Gem

      Hahaha, I'm a perfectionist. They are ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Debbie

    Gem, you have taken my breath away yet again.

    Suppressed laughter is seen
    Within depths of cerulean winks"

    ^This segment made me appreciate the wonderful moment captured within your words. I can just feel... the warmth and the special bond shared by two people in love.

    Breathtaking. I love your poems so much.


  • 14 years ago

    by trippetta TC

    Beautiful, am adding yo my list of fav's, love to hear differant forms!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    A beautiful poem, Gem-- 5/5!