In a world of Criticism

by Karl Wild GG23   Dec 7, 2006


I heard it's whats on the inside that counts,
But I never really had a care,
I wanted beauty in large amounts,
A cute ass and long blonde hair.

I was a young foolish boy,
Who cared what people thought,
Looked at love as if it were a toy,
And ignored everything I was taught.

I went after the cheerleaders,
Girls who were popular and cute,
Not the mediocre student council leaders,
I gave those girls the boot.

But deep down I liked those girls better,
Although they could only be a friend,
Because on my jacket I had a varsity letter,
And from teammates I'd never hear the end.

I was the star football player,
And could've had any girl in the school,
So I never looked past a girls first layer,
Instead chose love like a blind, selfish fool.

Made fun of fat girls and nerds,
In the hallway with the guys,
Belittled them with our words,
Today my actions I despise.

I thought when high school ended,
So would this cruel and ignorant game,
But in a world of criticism and T.V. so splendid,
I've realized the bullshits all the same.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    All of your poems are so original. I love that. The movie she's all that just came to mind when i read this lol. maybe because it was just on t.v. but anyway... it was a really great read. 5/5

    marcella

  • Awesome&I agree...the b.s never stops

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    i wish all guys could see it like you
    unfortunetly a lot of them don't
    but it's good you do
    this poem was really good
    I loved it
    nice work

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Wow this poem might be my favorite out of all of yours.. this is amazing and sooooooo many people can relate to this.. from either side too.. i love the way you wrote this poem.. the flow=flawless as always.. you just make it seem so easy.. i really loved it.. and the fact that everyone experiences this makes it a million times better. Excellentttt job!