Are you thinking of me 2?

by Freddie   Jan 1, 2007


I'm upset so im kinda stuck (cant write wen im upset)...ideas welcome.

And the moon wont set,
The sun wont rise,
Its 9am,
The stars sparkle like your eyes,
Im lying in bed, just thinking of you,
Wondering, are you thinking of me 2?

And the thunder roars,
But the rain wont fall,
Its 9.05,
Still the moon shines tall,
Im lying in bed, just thinking of you,
Wondering, are you thinking of me 2?

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  • Its got a very nice rhythm something I need to learn!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This poem is so cute! Gr8 work!

  • 17 years ago

    by michael

    Dang this poem is good .. really .. and thanks for the comment on my poems .. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by TeAr dROp

    I really like this poem keep up the good work
    -teardrop

  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This is really cute. Short..but its really sweet how it rhymes and everything. i like it! =] 5/5