Valentine's day letter

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jan 9, 2007


I'm at a loss of words right now
Cause its so hard for me to say
All the things I want to tell you
On such a special day

The way you hold me tight
And run your fingers through my hair
The way you look into my eyes
With your melting stare

The way you lean in for a kiss
And then nothing else matters
I lose sight of all tomorrow
I see now, and the moments ours

And i never thought I'd say this
I did not think it was real
To feel so safe and secure
So happy its so surreal

For things to be so perfect
And too good to be true
But right now things really are
Because i found love in you

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  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    I read this poem at the perfect time, seriously. I could not be more happy than I am right now. Great job at this poem, it's so sweet and it captures the idea of young love. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. it really describes what love should feel like to some people. Great poem 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    LAMP

    omg that was just amazing, so sweet. Its funny how when you meet someone special you dont know how you ever managed to live without them. I loved this poem cause I can just imagine how it would feel to recieve a letter like that so full of meaning and truth. Way to go

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Kay so i think i've read this poem before and im pretty sure ive commented but im doing it again because it just that amazing!! i freeking love this poem.!! great job. you should send this to hallmark its amazing. or you should put it in a card for lee for v-day. :D great job babesss.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni

    I find that your writing beats the cliches of so many writers. your writing goes beyond a level of it, it's wonderful. the way you describe everything and the word choice just thrills me! wonderful job dear! 5/5