A creative take on a more common emotion. Truly presents itself to the reader in a unique, well-thought-out way. The personification of a feeling sometimes doesn't work well, but you've pulled it off quite nicely. Great work!
AMAZING, you are such a great writer. This piece, magnificent. You have the talent of a true poet. The words all collided together, creating something so new and different. The flow of this poem was like the flow of sweet water, the meaning so deep and incredible. My words could hardly explain how great you did. This is worth 6/5 probably more.
This is, fantastic!
You have this amazing ability to use words in a way that goes far beyond simple, and it doesnt seem as if you are trying to sound like this...brain-heavy intelligencer...wow, i just made up my own word there..i hope that makes sense..you're just amazing in which words you chose to use...i look foward to seeing more from you, keep it up!