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by firexdancer Jan 29, 2007
Dark, fantasy /
I love the black,
it's so beautiful,
the way my tears sparkle in the
darkness like the silk of spiders web
i love the blood,
it's so delicious,
the way it trickles down my chin
like rivers of molten lava
i love the flesh,
it's so warm,
as if the heart underneath these white breasts was still beating.
This poem is short but still very powerful. It isn't original but imagery is great and it is easy to read. It is very interesting but it could be even more better. It still deserves 5/5
by Just Lucy
And again your use of words is fantastic! i love how you pen them! great work again hun!
I liked this, thought i have to say i prefered the first poem it read. the imagery is great and all but im not so big on all the dark stuff, great poem tho my feelings aside
OOh.. I liked this one. The imagery was awesome. You could fix the structure a bit, and vampire isn't spelled right. I added you to my favorites.
You really managed to paint a turely wonderfull picture! im not intothe vampire thing but your poems about it are great keep up the good work