Away From You

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Feb 7, 2007


It hasn't even been a day
But still it's been too long
Away from you, it's hard to take
It all just feels so wrong

All I want to do is cry
And for you to hold me tight
I want you to clear my tears
And tell me things will be all right

But I just need to keep in mind
That this is not for good
And that things will work out fine,
They'll work out if they should

But really only time can tell
If this was meant to be
The only thing that we can do
Is wait it out and see

But seeing you is hard to take
Unbearable, so hard to do
When I just want to hold your hand,
To hug, to hold and to kiss you

But once again, I can forget
That this is for the best
That the time away from you
Will sort out all the mess

And I know that its better
And it hasn't been that long
Its just even seconds without you
Feel out of place and wrong

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  • 8 years ago

    by IML

    I loved this poem a lot..
    im going through a long distance and this is how it truly is..
    Ty for sharing this writing. I love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Teria

    I liked this poem, not as well as the others. It seems a bit cliche, but with your style. If that makes sense, eh.

    "But seeing you is hard to take
    Unbearable, so hard to do"
    ^ That says almost the same thing in both lines... I think if you changed the word "hard" to something that means the same thing as unbearable, than it would make better sense.

    I loved the last two stanzas.
    It brought the entire poem together, and the last stanza was amazing. I absolutely loved it. :D

    Keep it up
    <3 Teria.

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    "But really only time can tell
    If this was meant to be
    The only thing that we can do
    Is wait it out and see"

    I like those lines alot^. This poem is really good. alot of emotion. the flow was really nice. Well done. 5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 11 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    "But once again, I can forget"

    Is this supposed to be But once again, I can't forget?? If not then sorry lol. Anyways great way to express your feelings for the one you love. Great flow and rhythm. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is really good. i defiantly enjoyed reading this poem very much. it flowed so nicely. you did a wonderful job on it. 5/5

    ~Kristina