Dripping

Dude... that was graphic. O.o

Haha. Some parts I really liked, and others I didn't.

"would you like that
would you actually like that"

^ That's just so... unpoetic. It just sounds like you're having a face-to-face argument with somebody. I would suggest changing it to something with more of a flow.

"With blood dripping down your neck
the parade of my heavenly quest"

^ I loved these lines! Especially the last.

:]

Oh, um... i would suggest moving it to dark/horror not misc.
bye.

Wow, that was gorgeous, 5/5
it's so full of anger, that you can see the poem clearly, wow.
gabriella

Wow im not sure what to say about this poem, it pretty much speaks for itself, theres a lot of emotion in it, its kind of angry but very well written 5/5

Hellooooooooooooooo. =]

Good poem.
Eek I haven't been on here in a while.
Haha.

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