by firexdancer Mar 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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She happily jumpropes in the yard, |
by Teria
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Wow. |
by xo kisses xo
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Omg! that is sooo sad! i love it! |
by Dee
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Amazing! its not too clear of what happens to the killers little girl tho. i assume she was murdered? a few typos but an overall very nice poem! |
by Curry
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Awhh this is so sad:[ but you are a really good writer! i gave this poem a 5 |
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Ooh I love a bit of action in a poem. Not sure I follow exactly-a father is killing a little girl to avenge the death of his little girl? Maybe im wrong. But it is powerful stuff either way. |