Pain

by Austin   Mar 25, 2007


No need to cry
No need for pain
as long as your happy
it wasn't in vain

Now that you're happy
i feel the same
No need to cry
i feel no shame

No need to cry
No need for pain
as long as your happy
it wasn't in vain

I was in need
but you were not their
so i hung my head
my face in my hair

Everyone says
You'll get over it
but i feel that I'm in
a bottomless pit

Full of Darkness
and of Sorrow
you were my light
and my tomorrow

BUT

No need to cry
No need for pain
as long as your happy
it wasn't in vain

Of course i say i love you
but always in vain
you just reject me
I'm the one in pain

Life is like a story
you write what you do
Whatever you say
its all up to you

What do you see
Pain and deception
Hope and deceit
whats their left inside me..

What did you want and see
the Egotistic Dream me
or the real caring me
the me i wanted you to see

So i ain't gonna cry
ain't gonna weep
just gonna sit here
Ive met defeat

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  • 16 years ago

    by Faded

    I thought the flow was off once or twice but not too much, so it didnt make a difference to me. the stanza that u repeated was a good choice since it shows thats what this poem is mostly about.

    and i was just wondering was this stanza...

    What did you want and see
    the Egotistic Dream me
    or the real caring me
    the me i wanted you to see

    suppose to be more like

    What did you want to see?
    The 'Egotistic Dream' me?
    Or the 'Real Caring' me?
    The me I wanted you to see.

    but anyways...

    good poem overall, you got ur message across. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I absolutely loved this poem.
    Excellente' for your first poem on thsi site!
    5.5
    The repitition and flow was perrfect.
    ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I got the message loud and clear! It was really refreshing to read a simple poem. the only stanza that I think needs work is this one

    What did you want and see
    the Egotistic Dream me
    or the real caring me
    the me i wanted you to see

    To me there's to many EE sounds in it but great job
    xoxo kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Good poem! i really liked it.. awsome emotion.. keep writing!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hey good poem, you have a good talent here so keep writing. take kare xxxxx

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