Untrue Love

by Austin   Mar 27, 2007


Untrue love

This love i have is so impure
this love for her is not right
i thought i finally found the cure
but i was wrong i must continue this fight

This fight for this untrue love
this fight to save what we once had
this fight i cannot push or shove
but in the end i will be sad

for even if i win her heart
it still will not be right
Ive known this right from the start
that their is no point to this endless fight

My love must not be good enough
i must not be what shes looking for
but i don't think that I'm that tough
that i can take the pain for much longer

She breaks my heart every time she smiles
she breaks my heart when i hear her cry
i would walk one thousand miles
if she gave me one last try

To be with her one final time
to feel her embrace once again
is it such a evil crime?
to love her though she is impure

I gave her my heart to hold
and what she did is unforgiven
she crushed my heart i feel so bold
and now she wants to be forgiven?

Well i cant give anymore so now I'm giving up
because my love will never be enough
i asked for just one last try
but never mind i rather die

Girl play your cards to your advantage
but don't break more hearts in your wake
theirs no need to be so savage
do this for me, just for everyones sake?

And if your love i cannot have
then this is fine Ive had my chance
but just remember forever more
that you have made my heart so sore.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh ur so young and ur so great! i cant imagine ur very creative at ur age.. can write like this very deep and impressive work. well i hope some readers would really love ur work coz its totally perfect and great flow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Greg Beam

    Wow this is great! very easy to read. flows perfectly. great use of words and a lot of meaning in the poem. keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    It's good.
    There's a lot of feelings embedded into it.
    The flow seems pretty rocky.
    Especially for the first stanza's last line.
    It just doesn't roll off the tongue, y'know?
    Otherwise, it's good.
    4/5 :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very good write!!
    I can relate to this poem as if it were MY life.
    I think the rhyming was right on track
    and the stanza syllabol/flow was pretty good
    overall I think you did a wonderful job
    xoxo kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    Good poem. I'm confused though, do you love this girl or hate her?