Internet love, but it was so much more.

by Alex   Apr 20, 2007


I'm at a loss of how I lost you, I choice that I could not choose. The times we spent together even discussing the weather, it was all a dream if only it seemed.

I stare at the screen wanting to scream. If only I had you close, but that would only be a dream. The girls you know stand right beside you, but the one you love is 5,000 miles behind you. If only you had been a little stronger, if only I had held you in my mind a little longer.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so heartwrenching...I have tears in my eyes..
    Beautiful flowe throughout, well portrayed imagery and the emotion behind the words are clear for the reader to sense.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb dear! Its perfect with an awsome flow n da best selection of words like choice n choose. wow 5/5 u sheer deserve

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, very sad but true again,and again we have so much in common, very well written, 5/5. I sure the same with someone I met, so deep in love ,but so many miles away,bless you,your friend Tracy,,,,,,,p.s keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Sad..poem. but it was a wonderful read. You have much talent, please keep writing...but id love to see longer poems...please ;) id love to read them.

  • 16 years ago

    by honeypot

    Hi Alex,

    I really liked this poem! "If only I had held you in my mind a little longer" line was divine.

    I think you really felt these words, and it shows in your imagery.

    Well done x

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