Bad Dreams...

by The Sky is Falling   May 11, 2007


The window is open.
It is so cold out
Please shut it
My heart is slowly freezing over.
Eyes are going cold
Body losing it's love and warmth.
What am I to do?
Your leaving me so cold and blue.
Why must you leave me?
You told me you never would.
Was it all fake?
Just a lie to get in my bed?
Please tell me thats not the truth,
I love you so much.
Please don't let me go.
This hurts so much,
this can't be real.
A dream?
More like my worse nightmare.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Sole

    Interesting format, but a well constructed message. I think the non-rhyming is a good idea because it enhances the randomness of the poem, which is effectively the same as a dream. Nice.

    Sole. x

  • 10 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow. this is really good, it was sad though, but it really puts this image in my head as i read it. thx for the comment, your poems really are amazing
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 10 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Really good. I can really relate to it at the moment. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Keep up the great writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Katie

    Ooo, I really like this one. A lot of great vocabulary. Good job. :]

  • 10 years ago

    by amandalynn

    I love it. it's realli good.
    5/5 all the wayy.
    <3 manda.