Very creative, you use very clever words and you went with an acrostic poem which it is always good for a little change. You had a good flow that was carried from beginning to end keeping its durability. The words you choose were clever as I said before and they were well chosen to fit the story you were telling. You followed the double acrostic's rules and kept the poem still sounding good which it is important thus you were able to create a very well written piece. Well done Laura, superb poem and I hope to see more as superiorly written as this piece of work.
I loved this poem alot. I found it to be creative and interesting. I particulary love this style it is one of my favorites, and for you to do a double shows how well you truely write. Your word choice is amazing, strong, powerful and emotion which you portrayed throughout this entire poem beautifully. This poem sounded great the flow was truely flawless I didnt find it to go off track at all. Well done on this I have found you to be quite talented just by reading one of your poems. 5/5 definitly ~mel