I really like this one. I love how you start off when one thing and then basically do it's oposite. Like to rant and rave and never hear. I think that's cool. It's sort of ironic. I'm trying to decide wheather I'll give it a four or a five. I think I'll give it a four because some of the 'oposite parts' I just wish some of them were a little different.
^ my favourite line.
This was an amazing write.
Your talent really shows through your work.
Your flow seem's so natural, and the word use just as so.
I wish I could write like you.
And there is no way I could give you any lower than a 5.
I like the title of ur poet thats why i dont hesitate to read it... the contents are very much good and u have a great imagery .. some lines has a deep meaning for me... thanks for sharing and keep it up!5/5
an excellent poem, I love the neat structure of the poem and the perfect flow.
I love your work so im going to put you in my favorite authors! XD
I especially like the first stanza,5/5