Us....not really

by Hermosa   Aug 30, 2007


When you said you had to leave
when you said you had to work
i felt secure
i thought you were leaving to work for us...

You said you would be back in three months
i awaited your arrival with open arms
i had good news for you
but you never made it back

i sat their in despair
thinking that something went wrong

i didn't know what happened
i didn't know what to do
one day while i was walking
i saw you and i know you saw me too
but you just kept walking because you were with another girl
we had one thing in common, we were pregnant by the same fool

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  • 15 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow
    i hope this didn't really happen to you! something like this almost happened to me, but thank God, i didn't get pregnant.
    this was very well written. simple, yet captivating. sometimes i'll just glance over a poem but i couldn't with this one!! incredable...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Ouch...dang I'm sorry that any guy would do that to you =( Guys can be real jerks sometimes *to put it VERY mild lols* That was a great expression of your feelings and what you went through ^_^ It's better to write it all then keep it inside ~_~ Another 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by Single girl

    This sad.. but it show how guys can such jerks... great poem though

  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    Wow, that was incredible yet disturbing. well written but if that ever truly happened it would bother me so much i'd knock him out with a frying pan, lol. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Wow that was..wow..? it's horrible how guys will get with one girl telling them what they want to hear then leave them for someone else..it's just plain sick. good poem though.

    amandaxx.

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