The bat

Short but very meaningful. Such a powerful expression of emotions displayed. 5/5, Em x

This was awesome man!! =]

So many meaningful words in so little place. Very enjoyful and powerful! An amazing write!
5/5 Keep it up!

I liked the simple straightforward style of this piece and the title certainly encourages you to think beyond the words. To my mind it seems that this poem could be a little longer as it feels there is more to be said yet it also seems to say enough.

Great job.