I love this poem... You have great attitude lol...
Seriously, this is very original and creative, I like it form the beginning to the end. Whole poem has good flow and the topic is truly interesting. You held my full attention through the whole piece, mostly with effective atmosphere and imagery that you created. Truly great idea for the poem.
5/5 from me
Hah, a truly loely poem. I like it. It's got an awkward rhyme to it. <3
the only issue I have is... NO CAPITOLIZATION. =[
It was good, but the lack of capitolization... sort of irked my nerves. Nicely written...