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by Abu3li   Nov 4, 2007


I'm still hurt of what you said
I couldn't sleep, lying alone in bed
Thinking of you, not trusting me
Thinking of you turning down my plea
How dare you deny me the right
Of sharing pain with you and blight
The pain was so excruciating
Misery is what you're creating
I really cared and was there for you
You pushed me away and turned me blue
If we still can't trust each other
Why should we care or even bother
I treated you as my soul mate
And I was zero in your rate
Love is not about happiness
It's sharing pain and miseries
So if you still can't understand
Sorry, I can't lend you my hand
Cause it's all about give and take
Not just laughing, that's a fake
I feel sorry for my unrequited love
I feel sorry for what I thought we have

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    I love this, it has a great message too. At first I was going to suggest that you might think about rhyming a word with "love" in the very last line, but then I realized that using "have" sort of marks that it's the end of the poem because you've broken your rhyme scheme. If that makes any sense =] Again, it's great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow really sad and amazing
    I loved the flow in it
    keep it up :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, very deep

    "Love is not about happiness
    It's sharing pain and miseries"

    you are the first 'GUY' who has similar thoughts as i have

    "So if you still can't understand
    Sorry, I can't lend you my hand
    Cause it's all about give and take
    Not just laughing, that's a fake"
    liked this part most

    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh very sad but u had expressed well all the hardly feels inside.. nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    I liked the story behind it. Good emotion too.

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