Through your eyes

by CY GINDLE   Dec 16, 2007

Even though I don't mean
to I always let you down

No happy endings
only a sad frown

If only I could see
the world through
your eyes

I could do more each
day than just survive

Maybe just maybe I
could be alive


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  • 10 years ago

    by Kristen

    That is wonderful...Was that a tribute to your wife?? It sounded sweet like you envied her life because she lives it so well.....*I'm not sure if that makes much sense....but anyway it was a great poem!!>>>

  • 10 years ago

    by Lyndz

    I really like this one. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by CWG

    Another great job! I know it is hard but try to learn to live and be happy for you and the hell with everyone else! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow, this poem was created in such a unique way. I really liked it! I had to reread it a few times though to get the meaning.. but nontheless, it was great. Keep writing, thank you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3


  • 10 years ago

    by Marwa

    Aw....i love dis poem so much it ade me realisie sumthin..
    keep it up!!!
    hope u read mines!