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by keithnwv Jan 10, 2008
Sadness, depression /
It's always been a part of me
a sign of joyfulness and cheer
but now its hard for me to do
when certain ones are near
they look at me with arrogant smiles
i find it hard to speak
when they walk by i turn away
sometimes i feel so weak
deep down inside my broken heart
i know nothing i've done wrong
i write these words to move on past
and bring back what is gone
where are you "smile", i need you back
to mend this heart of mine
with your help i'll take a step
to a better place and time :)
A lot of hurt in there but a lot of spirit too. Well written.
by Jodie Phillips
Well i thought that was great. Your words say it all. good job. thanks for your comment. Just thought i would try something new im glad it worked
Again, the hurt, heartbreak and betrayal speaks volumes in this poem. You miss someone dearly and it's very saddening that such a wonderful part of your life can be thought of as anything different than beautiful.
by Kate Hicks
I love your style, keep them coming. This is great. 5/5
by The Queen
U got the real attitude..goodluck and keep it up...things are not bas as it seem today u kno..as the song goes..there is sunshine after the rain...&( ^ ~ ^ )&..smile..