by Baby Rainbow
Submission date : 2013-01-24
Last edit : 2014-08-18
Midnight Sky ( F C )
I give this one a 5\5 & two thumbs up :)
Tara ( F P C )
Your endings are so powerful!! Another poem where the ending gave me goosebumps. I can feel your words, this is very well done. 5/5 ~Tara
Maher ( F P C D )
I love birds and this poem is my cup of tea. I especially love the many different birds used to represent the changes and pressures you describe artfully in this poem. A poem that involves research, cultural belief and superstition to a degree.
In other words, I really like it!
tylersgirl ( F P C )
Your an amazing writer. you give writing a new twist. good job.
Ben Pickard ( F C D )
Birds have been a passion of mine for years Saffie, so I was instantly drawn to this. Original, clever piece and I loved the ending.