by Baby Rainbow
Submission date : 2013-01-24
Last edit : 2013-01-25
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
This was very well crafted! I liked how you have used each bird, described them and weaved with a person's nature. It gives a very clear picture of a person who wants to believe in herself and fly free but is over powered by someone who is very domineering..sad and touching write.
Congrats on the win.
NightFlyer ( F P C D )
Beautiful poem, this is a well-deserved contest winner. The imagery of all the birds as representing all these qualities was exquisite! :)
Xanthe ( F P C D )
A late congratulations from me. I've read this a few weeks ago, but didn't have time to comment. It is one of my favourites by you. I never thought one could use that much metaphor, similes, and create such beauty as this.
"that your soul purpose was to destroy
I believe it should be 'sole'.?
A fully deserved win. Write more.
Im a poetic scholar ( F P )
christopher ( C )
I like your poetry a lot but I cant help thinking how u might be using ideas from other poems and not your own ideas. however I maybe wrong and If I am I apologise. your work is on the way to been good but you have a way to go yet. keep up the writing welldone