by Baby Rainbow
Submission date : 2013-01-24
Last edit : 2014-08-18
christopher ( C )
I like your poetry a lot but I cant help thinking how u might be using ideas from other poems and not your own ideas. however I maybe wrong and If I am I apologise. your work is on the way to been good but you have a way to go yet. keep up the writing welldone
Midnight Sky ( F C )
I give this one a 5\5 & two thumbs up :)
Tara ( F P C )
Your endings are so powerful!! Another poem where the ending gave me goosebumps. I can feel your words, this is very well done. 5/5 ~Tara
Maher ( F P )
I love birds and this poem is my cup of tea. I especially love the many different birds used to represent the changes and pressures you describe artfully in this poem. A poem that involves research, cultural belief and superstition to a degree.
In other words, I really like it!
Your an amazing writer. you give writing a new twist. good job.