Submission date : 2005-05-31
darkangel ( F P C )
great work. i love it.
hope things r ok
wow u have talent!! i loved this poem! thank you so much for the comment on mine lol i hope i dont die either lol keep up the great work!! 5/5!!
Fallen ( F P C D )
Jolly good work my dear. I liked it very well. The story it tells is so often the story of many torn apart friendships. I am sorry that if it happened between you and a good friend. A terrible thing to have happen. Now back to the poem, all and all I give it a 5. Keep writting my dear. Let your mind wonder and never fear to write it down on a piece of paper and share it. Beauty is also made by ones poetic words. Cheers!
Nicole Maree ( F P C D )
Awesome poem. Keep up the good work. And thanks for commenting on my one! Really appreciated. Luv Nicole =)
Zack ( F C )
Thats what i feel im doing rite now......i hope i dont just go with out a fight