Losing a friend

by Elynnka

Something has happed to you, dear friend,
You use to be yourself and now you pretend
To be someone else… someone untrue
I wish you would tell me…where’s the real you?
You broke my trust when you tore apart
All that tied us at the start…
Someone you use to hate is now your closest friend
I thought you could see through her mask of pretend…
She is to blame for she’s the one that took away
All of your inner beauty… and you thought it was ok…
So now you’ve built this other you, a monster
That keeps on breeding hate faster and faster…
Why have you done this? Can’t you see?
The way things are, is not how their meant to be.
You pushed me away, so there’s nothing I can do
To help reveal what’s left of you…

Look in the mirror and try to see
If this is the way you want to be…

Outside so beautiful, inside so dark,
An evil girl that has no heart…
A so-called rebel that knows nothing of
True freedom or how it’s like to love.
Clothes with prints that “scream” with pain,
All done for attention, but all in vain.
You don’t realize that you’re not the only one
To hurt, to cry, to feel undone,
Yet you don’t seem to get out your selfish hate,
Maybe you’ll realize it when it’s too late…
But until then you choose the wrong path,
You cut, you bleed and you forgot to laugh,
Your beauty now, is darkened by the sorrow you feel
When you see your new mask starting to peel…
It hurts to see how she plays you so cleaver
She changed you for now and maybe forever…

I hope someday you’ll see that the way you are now is just not right
And try to change back to how you were and not give up without a fight…


Submission date : 2005-05-31

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darkangel ( F P C ) at 2005-06-19

great work. i love it.
hope things r ok
sam xxxx

Chrysta at 2005-06-22

wow u have talent!! i loved this poem! thank you so much for the comment on mine lol i hope i dont die either lol keep up the great work!! 5/5!!
lotta love,

Fallen ( F P C D ) at 2005-06-25

Jolly good work my dear. I liked it very well. The story it tells is so often the story of many torn apart friendships. I am sorry that if it happened between you and a good friend. A terrible thing to have happen. Now back to the poem, all and all I give it a 5. Keep writting my dear. Let your mind wonder and never fear to write it down on a piece of paper and share it. Beauty is also made by ones poetic words. Cheers!


Nicole Maree ( F P C D ) at 2005-06-26

Awesome poem. Keep up the good work. And thanks for commenting on my one! Really appreciated. Luv Nicole =)

Zack ( F C ) at 2005-07-02

Thats what i feel im doing rite now......i hope i dont just go with out a fight

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