It's Not Your Fault

by Sandra D

You didn't do anything wrong, it's all me this time.
I don't really know what's wrong.
Maybe it's the fact I just saw my life flash before my eyes.
But it's not your fault.
You didn't know this would happen.
You didn't do this to me, I did.
I ruined myself, and now I'm hurt, permanently.
But you couldn't have done anything anyway.
It wouldn't have changed anything.
But don't blame yourself, just because...
I killed myself.

 

Submission date : 2006-11-11
Last edit : 2006-11-22

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MiSsUnDeRsToOd TeArS ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Great job on this. The emotion was great and your poem ended very good... not that killing yourself is something good but the way u ended it. In my opinion its great. 5/5 keep up the good work

Marcus ( F C D ) at 2007-04-28

I like it
but it feels like you should write it in 3rd person to make it more realistic
like your tellin a story

xxSnow AngeLxx ( F C D ) at 2007-05-21

Wow...the ending was sure twist..atleast i did'nt expect it to end tht way.....it was beautiful....filled with emotions sad n emotional...n penned properly.
but i do think it'd hv been better expressed wth the usage of third person..kp writing!
it has it's own beauty!
xxPoojaxx

Sam Mayo ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-21

Your poems are so sad some of mine are like that. i write down what i want to feel and all the horrid things that are in my mind this makes me fell better because if i want to have a good day i write and upsetting poem that would get rid of all my worry, anger, greif, anyway this poems remined me of some of mine:~)Sam

Lost and Confused ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-11

I love this poem. Its not your fault... such a great concept that everyone can relate to! The way it was written was very effective. But at the same time... it almost made me feel like I wanted to save you. Being able to fill a reader with emotions like this, ... I'm speechless. 5/5



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