Another Fallen Cry

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Feb 12, 2008


This juliet was bleeding,
Her soul's bright fire dim.
In a life of sorrows,
It was either sink or swim.

On the shore she saw him,
A romeo, prince of the night.
Against all odds she reached out,
And turned from garnish light.

Then he pulled her from the tide,
Saved the dying maid.
She afraid to love him,
And yet by her side he stayed.

With blind faith she followed,
Into his shadow she fell.
Seduced by black and velvet,
Drunk of passion's spell.

A day spent long in bliss,
A moment meant so much.
And no more was this juliet,
Starved from love's sweet touch.

Then the darkness overcame,
In silence he left her there.
Never saw her tears fall,
Or heard her heartstrings tear.

Left alone in pain,
Once again she did bleed.
Shackled by other's power,
Longing to be freed.

Once again, yet time was short,
In twisted fate they met.
In shaded seconds spent together,
Yet no where did they get,

Again ripped apart by time,
And distance seals the fate.
Now all this juilet feels,
Is pain, despair, and hate.

She cries without a tear shed,
She lives without a soul.
She curses the one she loves now,
For everything he stole.

'I love you' she did long to hear,
But these were words he never said,
And now this juliet lays weeping,
And wishes she were dead.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    .. This is amazing . It brings out alot of talent . This left me speechless . Perfect flow , rhymes and imagery . Alot of the rhymes you don't see too often . 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was sad. a real tear jerker.

    "She afraid to love him"
    needs to be
    "She's afraid to love him"

    just thought you should see that.
    5/5 great write

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    This poem is... so depressing.

    Really has alot of emotion in it, The structure and flow were amazing... But it's so depressing! lol, I got left with like this terable feeling at the end,

    great job though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Fantastic poem. It was beautifully penned, and good choice of words. One remarkable story has turned into a poem, amazing 5/5.

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Fantastic poem. It was beautifully penned, and good choice of words. One remarkable story has turned into a poem, amazing 5/5.

    -Sarah A.