We Are Eachother

by Lance   Feb 12, 2008


Me and you are forged as one
love burrning as an eternal sun
i love her more than my own soul
she is my diamond, and i am coal
her eyes as deep as the drowning space
loving with no ending grace
lay mylips upon her own
my love for her is all i've known

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  • 17 years ago

    by bill

    5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sirrah

    Oh my gosh i love this poem the most without a doubt...it's so beautiful, i don't think i have a favorite line, i loved it all...*sigh* I wish this could be written about me lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    'my love for her is all i've known'

    This line is so beautiful. A great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Very impressive, Lance. :]
    The emotions were intense, the flow was good, and it was beautifully written.

    "her eyes as deep as the drowning space
    loving with no ending grace"
    ^ I love these two lines. (: Simply amazing.

    Spectacular job. Overall: 5.5
    - Steph. x

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwwwz wat a cute poem!!!!

    <3 i love you silly

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