Life

by Lance   Apr 7, 2008


No one knows what life's about
all we do is fight and shout
you live for years and then you die
live and love, hate and cry
when your born you have no sin
as you grow older your mind sets in
you get a job to pay the bill
before you know it your over the hill
so why should we be forced to do
what someone tells us, both me and you
live your life and don't die young
you get one chance and then your done

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  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Wow i really like this one very true. this holds an excellent stand point. good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Diz

    Wow Lance...you have written exactly as i tried to portray in one of my poems < sadly ididnt do as well> but fantastic job....:-)

    ps i loved...

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This was a really inspiring poem. You have a lot of talent thats for sure. great job

    live your life and don't die young
    you get one chance and then your done

    ^^^my favorite stanza. It really spoke to me. Keep up the good work 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by bill

    Love it!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sheena

    Thats mostly true and I liked how you put it out there cause I thought the same thing and I to have wasted away my life and I to wonder why I put myself through what I do just to die in the end.

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