Of All

by Michelle18   Feb 14, 2008


Of all the stars up in the sky,
None of them compare to you.
Of all the lovers in the world,
I bet none of them feel the way I do.
Of all the hearts that beat,
None of them race as fast as mine.
From the moment I hear your sweet voice,
No one else matters at that time.
Of all the tears that I cry,
None of them are from pain.
Of all the last names in the world,
I pray that someday ours will be the same.
Of all things in life,
I hope you keep me in your heart.
But most of all,
I pray that our love never falls apart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I really enjoyed the flow to this. You picked words that flowed nicely instead of fancy words like most people. And it really did a good job on this poem. Great write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aww beautiful poem to read on valentines day. Makes me wish I wasn't single right now haha. Great work this poem had great flow and a TONS of emotion lovely job.
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Dino Dhamphyr

    This have to be one of the most beautiful love poems I've read by far because it was from the heart, and any love poem writing from the heart is a great one in my book, but either way it was written very well and about a very awesome topic. The one u lov3, Great job...n happy valentines day

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Excellent poem.The way you formed it made it kinda hard for me to read.If you broke it into stanzas it would be a lot smoother for the readers.But other than that this was a excellent read.Flow was pretty good and the emotion was dep.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved this style! It just flowed so flawlessly and had me hooked from beginning to end. The emotions were easy to relate with and the images you described were easy to picture in my mind. Well done *5/5*

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