One last time

by LiNa   Feb 15, 2008


For one last time you stood there and said goodbye
i walked away and saw you stand there looking at the ground
seconds later you walked away and i almost screamed
i still remember that day
i never thought i could hurt that bad but i did
you made me cry that night
i didnt think i could still feel the same way now
one last time i got to hold your hand
as i kneeled down and told you i'd always be here for you
as i watched you walkaway leaving me behind
was a sad day and a sad night
i'm lying on my bed thinking about that day and i can still picture it in my mind that vivid image of you and me
one last time i will think of you
and never feel sorry for what i did
one last time i will smile because of you
and laugh at your jokes
lying here almost closing my eyes
a pill bottle in my hand
for one last time i will see your face
and remember you
i can still see you standing there you and me
you holding my hand

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    This poem is one of the best i've written and it tells of what almost happened in the end but with a true begining. i almost took my life over this.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Im crying so hard right now ='[
    Its such a good poem && explains exactly how it feels for me....
    Good Poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    :) I love it... It's so amazing to imagine other people through their poetry, giving such a vivid imagery! :) 5/5.