Black Holiday

by Amy   Feb 19, 2008


Today
is the day
in which
i cannot stay

the time has come
time to go
where am i going
only god will know

grab a gun
or grab a knife
grab anything
that will take my life

last thoughts of myself
falling to the ground
when it is time
i shall not make a sound

for i will be free
you will be strong
please dont think
that i was wrong

name this moment
name this day
name my death
BLACK HOLIDAY.

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  • 15 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I love how short the emotion you have in this piece is, now its great emotion and works very well with you rhyming sceme and no i have nothing bad to say about this poem. - Raindrops 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by jane

    So emotional...i love it...5/5....= )

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Very emotional..great job!
    5/5
    Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    I love youre poem alot
    5/5
    good written and i think you should read mine k:)might interest you
    anyways you poem is full of emotion and has an amazing flow
    keep it up k

  • 16 years ago

    by Lifeis2cruel

    This is sad and some times i feel this way arpund my fam but then it all changes in a split secind thanks for shaering your peom and think that lots of people feel this way everyday

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