Goodbye dear liar

by Behind Blue Eyes   Feb 20, 2008


Same sh*t, different day. it seemed that was all it was.
and in fact, that is all it was.
it started with one lie, and lead to another.
and after that, they just kept rolling.
and now, lies that had been built on top of other lies
were breaking through cracks, and becoming visible.
and everyone began to see how ugly you and your life had gotten.
as for me, who stayed with you, supported you,
lied for you... it was just too much.

sometimes, burdens we carry are just a little too much
[...for our friends to expect us to hold]

i didn't abandon you.
i just set myself free.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    This poem was the sh*t. Honestly the flow was there and made you keep on reading. And I connected to the last 2 lines especially well.

    i didn't abandon you.
    i just set myself free

    Those lines are very powerful and given how they were used you put forth alot of emotion into them. I myself would try to capitalize the I's but that is just for me. Great poem

    -Daniel