Just Like You

by Romancing the Darker Side   Feb 20, 2008


I never loved a soul.
I never gave permission.
I always pushed life away,
I hid in my anger and shame.

See? I'm just like you.
Alone in the dark,
holding my breath.
When these walls fall in,
you'll know:
You've taught me well.

I'm plagued by every sentence,
And I've been up for days.
I'm over critical and arrogant,
And I play by my own rules.

I hide in my sorrow,
I'm a carbon copy of your tears.
Nothing ever comes out "right"
And words can't fix my mistakes.

My life is a sorrowful joke,
Everyone has moved away.
The people I knew are gone,
And history repeats itself:

See? I'm just like you.
Alone in the dark,
holding my breath.
When these walls fall in,
you'll know:
You've taught me well.

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  • 16 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Good poem. it's a fast read which means great flow, again nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was well written. The flow was decent, the word choice was good and the concept was different. I like it, but I'm not fond of repeating stanza's. I feel more when the poet uses more creativity.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Excellent poem... i liked it alot... the flow was perfect...lines werent too long or too short... it was flawless..

    and i like the fact that you repeated the second stanza and also made it the last.

    good work. keep writing.5/5

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