You are my fallen one

by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE   Feb 29, 2008


You are my angle
when you saw me crying by the lake
my last and only resting place
you walked over and lifted my head
looked into my eyes
i could tell you saw my pain and more
you saw a flame
small yet still burning
all you had to do was find the key and unlock the door
you kissed me on the lips
ever so gently
we both have nothing to loose but all to gain
now its 2 fallen angles
sitting by the lake at night
looking at the stars together
holding each other tight

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I love the emotion that this poem gives. I love the fact that it's relateable and it tells a story. Awesome poem and keep writing with emotion. For me this poem spoke to the soul and heart of man. Excellent title for and excellent poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    I like it alot....shows just how we need that one person...even if it is a fallin angel....nice.....xoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Good emotion to express

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

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