A reason for my broken wings

by Lizaveta   Feb 29, 2008


A reason for broken wings

A reason why like a bird I flew,
A reason why I got stuck to the rainbow,
A reason why the flowers grow,
Was you.

A reason why gentle breeze blew
A reason for my shining eyes
A reason why I believed your lies
Was you.

A reason why I thought it was truth
A reason why I was so naive
And probably the reason to live
Was you.

A reason why I was too blind to see
A reason why my heart already doesn't sing,
A reason for my broken wings
Was me.

For Steph's contest http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=100915

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem was decent. It wasn't astonishing... could've been more... creative. But it wasn't a bad write. The flow was good and the way it was written was decent as well.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    The last stanza was amazing!It totally tied the whole entire poem together.The beginning threw me off a bit but that's no biggie.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Love the poem.
    repetition went well.
    and ending was gr8.

    well done

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow...this poem is sooo sad and beautiful...it made me tear up a bit. iloved it. GREAT job!!! its so sad and very emotional.

  • 16 years ago

    by barbara

    Wow this poem is also amazing! i love the way you had that steady repetition of was you. im sorry that someone made you feel this way but congrats on capturing it.

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