November rain

by Lizaveta   Mar 5, 2008


November rain

It was raining, raining hard.
Wet eyes of the nature.
And my wildly beating heart
With aching little fractures.

It was raining, raining hard.
Days were getting rusty,
Pieces of me were broken apart,
Thunder was so gusty

It was raining, raining hard.
Through the glass of autumn
I was looking at the world around
And felt as if I was at the bottom.

It was raining far too hard.
Breathing with soaked sorrow,
My soul finally started to fight;
Raindrops eased the horror.

It was raining way too hard.
I knew that I had to do it
I knew that giving up
Was worse than the defeat.

It was raining, raining hard,
I broke the glass of autumn
Another fracture on my heart,
Wind just got much colder.

For me it was a rain of life
This monsoon November.
Not behind the glass, i came alive.
The raindrops are so tender.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ash

    Another masterpiece in effect. Each line and each word paints an atmosphere and as you continue to read the poem you become so engrossed in the words that you lose yourself into it totally.
    I liked the repetition in this one and I think that it was yet another amazing write - flawless and perfect as an artist that has drawn a masterpiece with each word.
    Excellent!

  • 17 years ago

    by Betty

    Beautiful!! Keep the words and art going! Absolutely loved it....a nice taste of Nature....

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Haha hence my name i have to give alteast credit for the great poem, the lines that he me thos most though were in the 4th stanza i believe when you said "It was raining far too hard.
    Breathing with soaked sorrow,"
    i felt like i was sitting on the other side of the window within the rain nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ares

    Just a beautiful piece poetry! it just really rocks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    It was raining, raining hard,
    I broke the glass of autumn
    Another fracture on my heart,
    Wind just got much colder.

    loved these lines..

    very impressive poem...

    beautiful and heart felt...

    good work..

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