BY STORMYANGEL

by StandStill   Mar 7, 2008


This poem (song) is by the user stormyangel. she was too afraid to post it. she doesn't think it's very good....she's crazy. please please comment! so i can prove her wrong. lol. (she does know i posted it...)

Amazing

You picked me up last night
And you didnt waste a second
To say whats on your mind

Amazing, I look like her
Amazing, I just stole her words
Amazing, my shining smile
Is hers
Amazing, amazing, amazing

Yeah, I bet shes amazing
It takes real talent
To steal a heart
To promise to give it back
But know
It was all a lie
Even before the start

Amazing, she did that too
Amazing, she cried at that part too
Amazing, we came here that night
It was so amazing, I held her so tight
Amazing, amazing, amazing

Amazing blue eyes
Hold so many lies
You look at me
And you never see me
No, not at all,
You don't mean anything you say
You're still recovering from her fall

Amazing, my heart beats like hers
Amazing, thats how she used to flirt
Amazing, she told me she loved me too
Amazing, amazing, amazing

Amazing how you can be so blind
To whats in front of your eyes
Boy, I'm not waiting anymore, not biding my time
Cuz you left me so far behind

Amazing, how you dont see
Amazing, how shes all you want me to be
Amazing, how you you think shes so right
Amazing, ever so amazing,
Shes still the reason youre alone tonight

Yeah its amazing
Were really nothing a like
Its just this picture perfect view of her
You have tucked away in your mind

Amazing, how you dont see me
Amazing how you dont believe me

I dont look like her
I dont say her words
I dont smile like her
I dont do the things she does
I dont cry for attention, like she does
My heart may beat,
But its not to her flirty tune
And when I say I love you
I really do

Amazing,
Yeah, amazing

Amazing, is what you picture her to be
But truthfully
Amazing, is me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    WOW! That's quite cool. I like the repetition, it just adds a different touch to it. But it's definately a good start. Personally I find it really hard to write songs, but that's my own opinion. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Thats soooooooooooo good. i loved the whole thing. i'd love to hear this song sung :P wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Damn, gabby after this i give up writing my own song. but stormyangel u got talent!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    What a great poem...it has everything...but the emotion stands out for me...good jo...5/5,....xoxo

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