Canvas

by LadyWaszky   Mar 8, 2008


Paint the canvas of life with a rainbow of hues:
from the color of the setting sun,
to that of the morning dew.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    "Paint the canvas of life with a rainbow of hues:
    from the color of the setting sun,
    to that of the morning dew."

    WOW hehe only ONE line to go over? haha
    well I loved it to be honest, it was very pretty.

    One thing is I would love to have read more.
    You left me hanging!

    :(

    PM me if u ever write on from this

    and yet again
    well done
    ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Beautiful! Very short and gorgeous!!!!!!!!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very short yet it stands out
    Great job
    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    This one stanza seemed so great...and unfortunately, that was it :( haha. You've haveeee toooo add more. Despite the fact that this is all you have, it looks very promising :).

    And no, I do not recognize you...oddly enough haha. No clue how I got on your buddy list haha.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good job on writing this. Although it was short, it had a beautiful flow, and the concept was deep. Very great job 5/5

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