Be with me

by ReinaPuente   Mar 13, 2008


Hold me
be with me
except me
love me
and i'll do the same
thats all i ask
dont break my heart
dont laugh in my face
dont crush my only dream
in brace me if you can, please!

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Oh.. wow short but it said mucho..
    amazing job.. love it. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Awww i liked this it was really short and cute we all want to be accepted

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    Awe!...this was so sweet..

    the only thing i saw wrong that u might concider changing is that "except" shuld be "accept" unless u didnt mean it that way, but it was really sweet! ;)

    <3 Aly

  • 16 years ago

    by Keegan

    I liked, had alot of deep feelings in it. Like you wanted someone to love you, and to hold you.

    - Good job, keep it up

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