Oh I just loved this title because it was so unique and refreshing to see. The whole just blew me away my dear. The way you described your yearning emotions was amazing because I found myself lost within your words. You made each scene easy for me to relate with and the words you choose to express emoiont was flawless. This has to be one of my fave poems by you ... amazing. Well done *5/5*
Beautiful poem. i was able to relate to it in every single way, in every single stanza. flow was good, and i loved the words you used. its such a truthful heartfelt poem, and i've been through exactly what your describing. i always love being able to relate to other people's poetry. amazing job, and i loved the title. keep up the amazing work!! :) 5/5!
Amazingly written with a great concept! But I'm gonna call this a "Poetic write" it tells more of a story through the poem. And it's lengthy-er than the average poem's structure. It's brilliant, well-written, has a great flow, and a wonderful concept. I'm sure a lot of people can relate... 5/5 (still amazed at how well it was written)
This was so sweet! But it was really sort of deppressing as well, I loved it though, it was absolutely captivating and beautiful to read.
It flowed really well too, and I really liked your word choice.
Oh wow.The emotion in this made me almost cry.you make it so heartfelt and warm.I loved it.Its on my favorites list and you are too.Your work is beautiful never stop writing.I'll read more of yours...
~Jo Anna EL
Ending is truly interesting but overall, honestly this is nice poem but I personally am not to impressed with it. I love mostly dark poems with a lot of metaphors. I think that atmosphere would be more intense if you add some more creative words to express emotions on more vivid way, and the thing that left a negative impression on me is the fact that you used -she- too many times.
I don't want to offend you I just personally don't like this piece too much, but I prefer other type of poetry.
Oh my gosh! This was really good! The flow was fantastic I mean it was rhythmatic and easy to read. The word choice was good not overpowering and not bland. I loved the way the point of veiw was placed it really drew in my attention. Nice work
This poem contain a lot of emotions that were so vivid.. actually i'm not fond of reading long poems yet this one seems so interesting 'coz its contents comprises the truth likewise this one is a very nice poem.
I love it. I had a friend, a close friend that made me feel that way. Actually she still does. Anyways I can relate to this very well and you wrote it beautifully. bravo! I would give you a ten but I am limited to a five. It is well deserved though.
This poem has such strong expression of emotions. I loved the descriptions, and I could imagine the whole poem. The rhymes where good and fitted perfectly. The structure and choosing of words helped the flow and past down this poem's message. Good work 5/5